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MTI翻硕热点作文话题|对在线教育的看法online education

在线教育这个话题，自疫情以来吗，连续好几年都有学校考到，比如23年北外翻硕写作真题、22年广外翻硕写作真题都是在线教育所以今天和大家分享两篇范文是我的学生写的，我负责修改注意作文的重点在于分享出自己的观点，论证自己的论点很重要，不要总是聚焦于单词。

范文一：弊大于利The outbreak of the epidemic contributes to the development of online education and makes it a hit. Still, debate rages fiercely about what that means in China, where millions of students are under the influence of online education.

From my perspective, the booming business is fuelling dangers about everything from personal education to the educational community.

One set of dangers revolves around the teaching efficiency. Compared with traditional offline education, online education could take a toll on the results of classes. In the class, teachers figure out whether students get to the idea and where to repeat mainly by eye contacts, expressions, gestures, which cannot be achieved in an online class. In addition, students find them a struggle to completely concentrate on what the teacher is saying given the interruptions in the home, especially for students who are lack of self-restraint. I bet everyone has experienced the embarrassing situation that a piece of game background music cut into the online class.

Another set of dangers involves the unemployment of teachers. Superstar teachers, sponsored by education business giants, heavily advertised, might gradually come to dominate the online education. One day, when that winner-take-all moment comes, students will have less choices and thousands of professional teachers will be threw out of work, online or offline. For example, students pursuing postgraduate studies crowd into Professor Xu Tao’s online politic theory class, because nearly every post online recommends only his class, causing other experienced teachers to drop out and new blood to be hampered form growing in that field. That phenomenon weighs heavily on the sustainable development of online education.

The third centers around threatening to add to the financial burden of both the government and families. Certain electronic devices and a smooth network, which are required in online education, are nonessential items in poverty-stricken areas. In 2020, when all schools switched to online education, local governments had to send devices and mobile networks to extremely poor families, and gave internet subsidies to disadvantaged families. Some students in the countryside took classes in the fields in order to have better internet conditions. According to China News Service, a 14-year-old girl committed suicide under the impulse, for there was only one smartphone but three kids in the family. Enormous evidences show that online education unintentionally exacerbates the plight of financial conditions.

All in all, “Education is a primary task that is crucial for generations to come”, dealing a heavy blow to education in all respects, online education deserves a more cautious attitude. (417字)

范文二：弊大于利In modern times, the combination of the Internet and other fields is inevitable, among which online education is a typical example. Online education have found its way to schools and families, and increasingly played an important role in education industry. Some school administrators and parents generally believe online education is not to be trusted because it is still in development stage. But others argue that online education produced in the new era have many advantages and people can use it. As far as Im concerned, its advantages outweigh disadvantages.

First of all, online education improves the quality of education. On the side of imparting knowledge, online education has changed some shortcomings of the traditional classes, such as tedious teaching methods and spoon-feeding education. It adopts multimedia to transfer texts, graphics, sounds, colors and other information, so that the words in the textbook come to life in the virtual world, strengthening the coordination of students hands, eyes and ears and making students better understand the knowledge. In addition, on the side of acquiring knowledge, students autonomous learning ability is improved. In the context of learning through the Internet, students are separated from teachers, which requires students to restrain their own behaviors, rely on themselves to design the learning process, and finally achieve the goals of learning. The whole learning process activates students positive thinking, strong interest and enthusiasm. Through online education students have virtually cultivated the ability to manage and restrain themselves. Thus online education has improved the quality of education by focusing on the two most important sides in the whole education process.

Furthermore, online education has realized the sharing of educational resources. China, with a large population and the wide disparity among regions, has performed uneven distribution of educational resources. Under the circumstance, online education can make those areas with poor well-beings and education can enjoy the best educational resources and get the best learning-support services like developed areas. Of course, online education can conduct the same function for global education. It can break down language and distance barriers, so that poor areas in Africa can enjoy the best education from Harvard University. Online education will make the world s education industry a big step forward.

Meanwhile, we cant deny the disadvantages of online education.It lacks face-to-face interaction and necessary 

flexibilitysince students just stare at the computer all the time. However, as we all know, everything has two sides, so does online education. We should not refuse to accept new things because of their shortcomings.

To sum up, although online education has advantages and disadvantages, the advantages take priority over the disadvantages. Online education has made positive contributions not only in improving the quality of education, but also in benefiting the whole world. Through the reasonable use of online education, I believe the prosperity will desirable.（469字）